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Yes!!!! good start… I think your thesis statement is clear and they coincide with you paragraphs.. one suggestion: Put the paragraphs in the same order as the porotitos in your thesis statement and try to make the language in your topic sentence more closely the same as the language in your thesis (its ok to repeat, it just helps with clarity).
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